viernes, 30 de mayo de 2014

Outline


Title: How Paper Is Made


Thesis Statement: 
There are two basic steps to making paper.


Fact 1:
The first thing to do is to cut down the trees.

Detail(s):
Paper comes from trees so the first thing to do is to cut them down.

Fact 2:
Fibers called cellulose are sprayed on screen.

Detail(s):
Trees are submitted to different process until it changes into fibers which are sprayed on screen.

1 comentario:

  1. Hello Madtie,

    Please remember to capitalize every word in a title. Review your Fact 1, I think it doesn´t make a lot of sense.
    Thanks, happy weekend!

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